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We met one stormy night [please critique] by jellyjammfan We met one stormy night [please critique] by jellyjammfan
'We met one stormy night'

OH, I love this movie! It's just so adorable ^^

Anyway, I saved a screenshot of it on my phone, edited it with some text and came up with this. the text on my phone says 'I remember we met one stormy night'.
I would have added text to this one, but I couldn't figure out where I could have put it without ruining the original image. This took me about 10-15 minutes to draw.

Critique's and comments would be greatly appeciated, just so I can see what people think of the style I did it in.
I've never done much with shading, so I'd be happy to know if I did it right or not.
Critique by Kevin-swanson Dec 3, 2012, 6:34:57 AM
first of all, I think this looks great! the use of shading works really well, and so does the use of color.
for originality, I'd give it 4/5 because this is the first I've seen of this part of the movie, in fan art anyway.
I think the backround looks great, the different colors on the mountain work well.
This could be a little better, though. you could have done a little more shading so we can tell which way the light's coming from, but then again that's done pretty well too.
overall, it's a great piece of art, although I feel like the contrast of some of the colors could have been handled better.
What do you think?
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December 1, 2012
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